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Icefire,
The lie we all told,
Lives on in my dreams,
Will it ever leave?
Will I ever be free?
When will you come to me again?
Piercing gaze of blue ice,
Hair the colour of flames,
IceFire,
I dub thee,
Be free in my dreams,
Yet hate me in my mind,
Under the mansion,
Lost in dust and gloom,
A relic of the lost,
A beacon of light and hope,
Hidden within the darkness that blares forth,
Come to me again,
Show me the hidden door,
And myself,
The shards of glass,
Like hazy dreams,
Meet again.


-- Eloise Pelser 2007
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This was a one shot poem I did back on 2007, I found it today hidden under a giant mound of paper and I liked it. And now I smell hazing from a certain someone coming.

But yeah. I can't remember what was going through my mind all that clearly, but this was the result. Completely abstract and fractal, just a little freeform. Go me.

If you want to use this poem, or parts of it, or even an idea, please give me credit and ASK. Now I'm off to get one of them MY WORK IS NOT ORPHANED stamps.

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:iconshinear:
ELLIE LOVES ICEFIRE

ily <3
:iconotterbane:
>:/ Yes Emmy, I am in love with a figment of my subconscious. Fair enough for me. :P

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"For... Pony..."

Ever notice that the world goes off if there are nude photos of children... But there are naked babies on calendars?
:iconshinear:
Well, I'd be more worried if it was Leapfrog...
:iconrhubarbleaves12864:
Dreams are very influential!

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mmmm... Rhubarb Leaves... *drools*
*eats the leaves and falls into seizures* :nirvana:
:iconotterbane:
Like you you mean? :P Luv ya bubs.

--
"For... Pony..."

Ever notice that the world goes off if there are nude photos of children... But there are naked babies on calendars?
:iconotterbane:
We both know that lol! Remember Cindy's dream? With the bag of oats? XD Good times.

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"For... Pony..."

Ever notice that the world goes off if there are nude photos of children... But there are naked babies on calendars?
:iconshinear:
Yes, like me.

Or at least, like 2007!Emily.
:iconotterbane:
Hahaha! Okies Slemily. Elliewheeze is bored.

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"For... Pony..."

Ever notice that the world goes off if there are nude photos of children... But there are naked babies on calendars?
:iconrhubarbleaves12864:
Yes I do! :rofl:

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mmmm... Rhubarb Leaves... *drools*
*eats the leaves and falls into seizures* :nirvana:

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